First draft evaluation

Music Promo Final

Advert Final

Digi-Pak Final

Mrs D

Your music promo has lots of potential Georgie. The pace and tone is really effective. Are you creating the same branding across your print tasks with the images you have chosen? The music promo is cheeky and fun - can you say the same about your still images?

2nd draft music promo

Dolby

Georgie, I can see that you have some great shots and ideas here but needs lots more footage!

1st Draft Advert

This is the second draft of my advert, again I recieved audience feedback and was told again that they liked the main image and how it linked with the main music promo as she wears the dress and also liked how it links to the digi-pak front cover. They did however advice that I should change the font/font colour on the bottom of the advert so that it is clearer, so I will try different colours to allow this to happen as I do not want to change the font as it allows continuity between the rest of the advert and the digi-pak.

Digi-Pak 2nd Draft

This was the second draft of my digi-pak. I have recieved audience feedback and they stated that they liked the front cover but felt the back cover was not quirky enough to fit the whole project. Therefore, I will go back to my original images and find a better image to fit the general feel of my music promo to allow continuity.

1st Draft Digi-Pak

This was the first general idea for my digi-pak. I felt that the quality and effects of the images did not feel as happy and vibrant as the music promo feels so I must change the effects of the images to make them brighter and more colourful. I also was advised to change where the text is on my front cover as it was not as clear as it should be so I will have to look at the position of my image and text.

1st draft construction

Dolby

Some nice images here Georgie, maybe write a few lines for each one and more importantly,I still need to see a draft of the video please as time is running out!

Draft Digi-Pack

Original images

This was an image I took for part of my digi-pak however I do not think I will use it as the framing does not allow the whole lampost to be in. And if I were to have the whole lampost in the artist would be too far away and it would not promote her very well as you would not be able to see her.

This image I was going to use for my back cover for the tracklist as it has space in the middle to fit a list in. However, the weather meant the sky and general look of the picture is very dull so I would have to change effects on it.

I preffered this image for a back cover for my tracklist as it allows the artist to continue to be promoted as it features her and also I could use the tree as a background for the list of tracks to go on.

I will probably use this image for my main cover of the digi-pak front cover as it features the artist in the centre therefore will do the job of promoting her look, she also looks happy and content and is on her own therefore fits the lyrics of the main music promo. I however like the picture above will have to edit this image to make it look brighter and more vibrant. I prefer this image to the one below it as it has a better framing and I also like how you can see the road continuing behind her as it feels as though she has walked the way alone which matches how the song shows her developing the idea and accepting that she can be alone.

This image again has the artist in the centre however she is not walking dead down the centre of the road so the framing will not look right when I crop the image.